As someone who would likely be described as a "doubter", I have to say, your video doesn't sell me on the game. A significant amount of talking points you mention are just things that are common in video games these days and AAA games in particular. The only thing that feels like it is actually about the unique experience this game can deliver is the mentioning of the "road trip" theme at the end.
If you want to show people why you think they should be excited, put up the things you think are truly unique about this game and refrain from using flat, non-descriptive phrasing like "epic story".
Mind you, not everyone who has doubts isn't excited about this game. I'm pretty intrigued, but I have some doubts about the game - which is, I think, a healthy approach about pretty much anything.